Which revision of the passage makes the best use of transitions?
When you meet the president, shake his hand firmly. Look the
president in the eye when you shake his hand. Speak clearly and
confidently. Ask your questions about his policies politely.
A. When you meet the president, shake his hand firmly. First,
look the president in the eye when you shake his hand.
Second, speak clearly and confidently. Indeed, ask your
questions about his policies politely.
B. When you meet the president, shake his hand firmly. After
that, look the president in the eye when you shake his
hand. At the same time, speak clearly and confidently. Of
course, ask your questions about his policies politely.
c. When you meet the president, shake his hand firmly. Also,
look the president in the eye when you shake his hand. At
the same time, speak clearly and confidently. Finally, ask
your questions about his policies politely.
D. When you meet the president, shake his hand firmly. On the
one hand, look the president in the eye when you shake his
hand. On the other hand, speak clearly and confidently. In
summary, ask your questions about his policies politely.