Which option is the best revision of the sentences?

The girl ordered sushi at the restaurant. It came with soup.

Responses

The girl ordered sushi at the restaurant, which came with soup.

The girl ordered sushi at the restaurant, which came with soup.

The girl ordered sushi, which came with soup, at the restaurant.

The girl ordered sushi, which came with soup, at the restaurant.

The girl, which came with soup, ordered sushi at the restaurant.

The girl, which came with soup, ordered sushi at the restaurant.

The girl with soup ordered sushi at the restaurant.

1 answer

The best revision of the sentences is:

The girl ordered sushi at the restaurant, which came with soup.

This option clearly conveys that the sushi ordered by the girl includes soup, maintaining clarity and proper structure.