Neither is correct.
2 would be right if there were a period after Poseidon.
Which one is right
"Tell me more," bellowed Posiedon, "who are these people?"
"Tell me more," bellowed Poseidon, "Who are these people?"
The second one
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"Tell me more," bellowed Poseidon. "Who are these people?"
Would it be okay if I typed my essay and if you could revise it? I already revised it but I want to make sure I did it alright before I write my final draft.
I won't revise it. But if you post it, someone may help you.