Which of the following sentences correctly uses punctuation to show a quick change between ideas? In the end…everyone was safe…the sun set was a good day

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The sentence can be punctuated more clearly to show the quick change between ideas. A corrected version could be:

"In the end...everyone was safe; the sunset was a good day."

This corrected sentence uses a semicolon to clearly separate the two related but distinct ideas. However, if you want to maintain the ellipsis for a dramatic pause, you could also consider:

"In the end... everyone was safe... the sunset marked a good day."

Choose the version that best fits the tone you want to convey!