Which is the best revision to sentence 4 (reproduced below) that is appropriate for the purpose and context of the passage?

William Shakespeare uses a 25-line soliloquy.
A.
In Julius Caesar, a well-known drama by William Shakespeare, there is a 25-line soliloquy in Act II Scene I.
B.
William Shakespeare uses a 25-line soliloquy in Act II Scene I, in his famous drama titled Julius Caesar.
C.
In Act II Scene I of Julius Caesar, William Shakespeare does a clever job exposing Brutus’s thoughts to the audience when he uses a 25-line soliloquy.
D.
In Act II Scene I of Julius Caesar, William Shakespeare uses a 25-line soliloquy to expose Brutus’s thoughts to the audience.

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The best revision to sentence 4 that is appropriate for the purpose and context of the passage is:

D. In Act II Scene I of Julius Caesar, William Shakespeare uses a 25-line soliloquy to expose Brutus’s thoughts to the audience.

This option provides specific context by mentioning the act and scene, maintains clarity, and explains the purpose of the soliloquy, which enhances the reader's understanding of its significance in the play.