Because she'd just eaten a bowl of corn flakes, Ms. Frazzle, while swimming in the pool got a sudden side cramp and had to be rescued by the lifeguard.
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A Because she'd just eaten a bowl of corn flakes Ms. Frazzle while swimming in the pool got a sudden side cramp and had to be rescued by the lifeguard.Because she'd just eaten a bowl of corn flakes Ms. Frazzle while swimming in the pool got a sudden side cramp and had to be rescued by the lifeguard.
B Because she'd just eaten a bowl of corn flakes Ms. Frazzle while swimming in the pool got a sudden side cramp and had to be rescued by the lifeguard.Because she'd just eaten a bowl of corn flakes Ms. Frazzle while swimming in the pool got a sudden side cramp and had to be rescued by the lifeguard.
C Because she'd just eaten a bowl of corn flakes, Ms. Frazzle, while swimming in the pool got a sudden side cramp and had to be rescued by the lifeguard.Because she'd just eaten a bowl of corn flakes, Ms. Frazzle, while swimming in the pool got a sudden side cramp and had to be rescued by the lifeguard.
D Because she'd just eaten a bowl of corn flakes, Ms. Frazzle, while swimming in the pool, got a sudden side cramp and had to be rescued by the lifeguard.
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The BEST revision of the sentence is:
D Because she'd just eaten a bowl of corn flakes, Ms. Frazzle, while swimming in the pool, got a sudden side cramp and had to be rescued by the lifeguard.
This option includes the necessary commas to properly separate the clauses, improving clarity and grammatical correctness.
