The two excerpts that help to build an informal tone are:
- “Though two walls were missing, she concluded it was due to wind and rain and the birch tree that had swindled its way up and through the middle of the sweet, abandoned home.”
- “After rinsing each dish in the creek, she dried them with her shirtsleeve and put them back in place.”
These choices utilize more casual language and imagery that creates a relatable and informal feel.