Which change, if any, is needed to the underlined text?

expedition including Henson
M. expedition, including Henson,
P. expedition, including Henson
R. expedition including Henson,
S. No change

1 answer

To determine the correct option, we need to consider the grammatical structure and punctuation of the sentence. Generally, when adding details or clarifications, a comma is typically used before "including."

The options you've provided are:

  • M. expedition, including Henson,
  • P. expedition, including Henson
  • R. expedition including Henson,
  • S. No change

The best choice would be to add a comma before "including" to clearly indicate that "Henson" is additional information relating to the "expedition."

Thus, the correct answer is M. expedition, including Henson,.