To best develop the character of Ava in the sentence "Ava entered the room and found four kittens," option D is the most effective. It not only describes Ava's action and emotional reaction but also provides insight into her personality and her affection for the kittens. This helps the reader connect with her character on a deeper level, showing her delight and nurturing side.
Which additional description would best develop the character in the sentence Ava entered the room and found four kittens. A. The kittens were all various shades of grey. They ran to Ava immediately, meeting for attention. B. Ava loved kittens. She reached out to pet them. C. Ava had long red hair and green eyes. She wore jeans and a hooded sweatshirt. D. Ava sank to her knees and cooed at the fireballs, delighted by their tiny mews.
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