when describing a deserted place how can you use onomatopoeia to biuld up the tension and make it fun for the reader? please give some examples

Question

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Answer 1

Creaking door hinge
Whispering winds
Hum of bees

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http://grammar.about.com/od/mo/g/onomaterms.htm

Answer 2

i am trying to create a sense of emptiness in the deserted house and i am walking up the flight of staires so how can i use onomatopoeia?

Answer 3

echoing footfalls
deafening silence

Answer 4

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Answer 5

This does not help okrr ok it's done

Answer 6

Noise of footsteps.

Answer 7

Noise of wind.

Answer 8

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