What were some techniques the author used to develop the characters? Think about the ways the author helped you to understand the character.

Provide at least one example from the texts to prove your thinking)

"Amy Metaphor" By Elisa Oh and "From Scratch" By Susie Castellano

find a quote in the text above

make it sound like a middle schooler not to kidish tho

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I think the authors helped us understand the characters by describing their thoughts and feelings in detail. For example, in "Amy Metaphor," the author writes, "Amy's heart pounded in her chest as she nervously approached the stage, her hands trembling with excitement." This quote really helps us feel what Amy is feeling in that moment and understand her character better. In "From Scratch," the author describes Samantha's inner struggles with her identity and how she tries to fit in at her new school. These details really help us get to know the character on a deeper level.
seperate the 2 texts
In "Amy Metaphor" By Elisa Oh, the author helps us understand the character of Amy by describing her thoughts and feelings in detail. For example, the author writes, "Amy's heart pounded in her chest as she nervously approached the stage, her hands trembling with excitement." This quote really helps us feel what Amy is feeling in that moment and understand her character better.

In "From Scratch" By Susie Castellano, the author develops the character of Samantha by describing her inner struggles with her identity and how she tries to fit in at her new school. These details really help us get to know Samantha on a deeper level.
no talk about lily in "from scratch"
In "From Scratch" By Susie Castellano, the author develops the character of Lily by describing her inner struggles with her identity and how she tries to fit in at her new school. These details really help us get to know Lily on a deeper level.
add a quote from the story too
In "From Scratch" By Susie Castellano, the author develops the character of Lily by describing her inner struggles with her identity and how she tries to fit in at her new school. One quote that exemplifies this is, "Lily couldn't help but feel out of place in her new school, surrounded by unfamiliar faces and expectations." This quote helps us understand Lily's feelings of uncertainty and isolation as she navigates her new environment.
ok thats good! but make it sound a lil like a middle schooler
In "From Scratch" By Susie Castellano, the author shows us what Lily is going through by saying, "It's like, Lily felt so lost in her new school with all these new people and stuff. It was kinda overwhelming, you know?". This quote really explains how Lily is feeling and trying to find her place at her new school.
What about Amy
In "Amy Metaphor" by Elisa Oh, the author helps us understand Amy by saying, "Amy's heart was racing like crazy as she walked up to the stage, her hands shaking so much with excitement." This quote really shows how Amy was feeling super nervous and excited at the same time.