What is wrong in this paragraph:

Question

Not only that, Covid-19 played a major effect on financial status around the world. People lost their jobs due to either it was seen as an unclean working environment because the virus rapidly spreads at those areas.

Answer 1

This paragraph should be revised for clarity and improved grammar:
"Covid-19 had a major impact on the financial status of people worldwide. Many lost their jobs due to workplaces being perceived as unsanitary environments where the virus could easily spread."