What is wrong in this intro:

Question

A television is a telecommunication medium used for transmitting moving images and sound in today's digital era young people's behaviors, beliefs and perceptions are shaped by television and films, because the mind are easily influenced.

Answer 1

There are several grammatical errors in this sentence.

1. "A television is a telecommunication medium" should be "Television is a telecommunication medium"
2. "in today's digital era young people's behaviors, beliefs and perceptions are shaped by television and films" should be "In today's digital era, young people's behaviors, beliefs, and perceptions are shaped by television and films"
3. "because the mind are easily influenced" should be "because minds are easily influenced"