The thesis statement is missing a clear claim that explicitly defines the problem being addressed (cyberbullying) and establishes the necessity for the proposed actions. While it includes actions parents should take, it doesn't explicitly state the significance or impact of the issue at hand. A strong thesis statement should outline both the problem and the proposed solutions clearly.
What is missing from the following thesis statement? Parents should limit the usage of smart phones, monitor their children's online activity, and report any cyber bullying to school officials in order to combat this problem.
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