What do you want to do if you have a lot of money?

1. I want to donate a large sum of money to a society for poor people. To die with money is a shame.]

2. I will go abroad to study English. I like to go to Harvard University, where I will major in economics. After graduating from the University, I will teach economics at Korea University.

3. I will travel to the USA. I will visit many beautiful places there such as Golden Gate Bridge, Niagara Falls, Las Vegas, etc.

4. I want to buy a brand new car. I will travel to many wonder places in our country.

5. I want to buy a lot of comic books and read them all day long without going out. I can order food on the Internet. I don't need to go to work. It would be fantastic.

6. I want to save money to a bank. I know financial technology. If I deposit 30,000 dollars. I can get a lot of interest in a year. I will prepare for the future. If I spend lots of money, in the future, I will repent for that.

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1. = fine

2. I will go abroad to study English. I would like to go to Harvard University to major in economics. After graduating from the University, I will eventually teach economics at Korea University.

3. I will travel to the USA to visit many beautiful places, such as the Golden Gate Bridge, Niagara Falls, Las Vegas, etc.

4. I want to buy a brand new car. I will travel to many wonderful places in our country.

5. = fine

6. I want to save money in a bank. I know financial technology. If I deposit 30,000 dollars, I can earn a lot of interest in a year. I will prepare for the future. If I spend lots of money now, I will be sorry in the future.