Delete the quotation marks around giving in (or are you quoting someone?).
The rest is fine.
What do you think? Does this paragraph require any improvements? What do you suggest? Should I include more?
Write a paragraph describing Rosa Park's courage.
What I have written: Rosa Parks was an African-American woman who, at the age of 42, had the courage to say "no" to her oppressors. Tired of "giving in," she refused to stand and give her seat upon a public bus to a white man. She was later arrested for her actions and thrown into jail. However, this incident sparked the Montgomery Bus Boycott, which then led to the end of segregation. Therefore, by doing so, she ultimately demonstrated the positive effects one person can have while fighting for change.
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I am quoting Rosa Parks.
Are you certain there is nothing that I could improve?
Are you certain there is nothing that I could improve?
If you are quoting anyone, you need to give the proper citation. Where did you read this? Cite it properly.
https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/01/
https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/01/
Oh. Alright.
Does it require any more improvements, though?
Does it require any more improvements, though?
Should I include anything else?
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