Overall, Werner did a great job on his final essay for 9th-grade English. His pronunciation was clear and specific, earning him full points in that category. He also used pictures and visual aids effectively to convey his review, earning half of the points in that category.
In terms of his review summary, Werner did a good job of presenting his claim in the introduction and providing evidence to support it in the body of the review. He effectively addressed counterclaims and provided rebuttals to them. His recommendation at the end was clear and concise.
Werner did a good job of responding to the audience's questions, showing that he had a good understanding of his material and was able to engage with his audience effectively.
Overall, Werner scored well on his final essay, earning a total of _____ out of 50 points. As for whether I would go see the movie after hearing this review, I would say that I might consider seeing it based on Werner's recommendation and the evidence he provided to support his claim. His review was well-thought-out and informative, which would make me more inclined to see the movie.
Werner Final essay grades 9 th -grade English
_______ Clear, specific pronunciation of language (10 points)
_______ Use of pictures and other visual aids to convey body of review (5 points)
_______ Review summarized within 2-4 minutes (20 points)
--Claim, hook in introduction: sci-fi movie good/bad?
--Evidence supporting claim in body: facts, examples, observations, etc.
--Counterclaim: Respond to opposing opinions about movie
--Rebuttal: explain why they are not true
--Solution: Recommendation (don’t/see it), other call to action; rating
_______ Respond to audience’s questions (15 points)
_______ Total (out of 50 points)
Comments: Would you go see this movie after hearing this review?
Why or why not?
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