were suppose to mark all figurative language, sensory imagery, peotic devices, and any other diction and rhetoric

Question

The something that I had noticed before clicked in the man's throat again, and he turned his back. The boat had returned, and his guard were ready, so we followed him to the landing-place made of rough stakes and stones and saw him put into the boat, whcih was rowed by a crew of convicts like himself
alliteration- stakes and stones and saw , crew of convicts
sight:rowed by a crew of convicts like himself