We are looking for suitable accommodation in south-west Ireland. (on seafront, near Cork) Any ideas?

Question

Can you check these two sentences, Writeacher?

1) Does your hotel offer both a kids’club and a playground where my child can spend time outside?
2) It is important that the hotel offes a fully supervised children's summer camp as well as a playground where my child can spend time outside.

Answer 1

Some potential revisions for you ~

1) Does your hotel offer organized children's activities, with both inside and outside capabilities?

2) It is important that the hotel offes a fully supervised children's summer camp, as well as a playground where my child can spend free time outside.

Answer 2

http://www.cork-guide.ie/

http://www.tripadvisor.co.uk/Tourism-g186598-County_Cork-Vacations.html

I'd be all over these websites to find the right hotel in the right place!!