Very deep heartfelt condolences to her immediate family. As I know, we all were raised in childhood times back at Palnol. I still remember our best and old memories we used to play games and walk together. My Big sister, Rest in Peace. We'll meet you at the Easter sky.

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I offer my deepest heartfelt condolences to her immediate family. As I recall, we all grew up together in our childhood days back in Palnol. I still remember the wonderful memories we created, playing games and walking together. My big sister, rest in peace. We’ll meet again in the Easter sky.