Use the sentence to complete the activity. The child held on to his mother as the train went by the platform. Revise the sentence by making the underlined words more precise, adding at least one adjective or adverb, and adding at least one sensory detail. (2 points)
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The young child tightly clung to his tall mother with anxiety evident in his eyes as the loud, roaring train swiftly passed by the crowded platform.