Use the sentence to complete the activity. The child held on to his mother as the train went by the platform. Revise the sentence by making the underlined words more precise, adding at least one adjective or adverb, and adding at least one sensory detail.

Answer 1

The young boy tightly grasped onto his mother's hand as the roaring train rushed past the crowded platform, the loud screeching of the brakes filling the air.