Use the sentence to answer the question.

The kids visited their grandparents, and the kids were given a gift by them.

Which sentence is a revision that best corrects the shift in voice?

(1 point)
Responses

The grandparents were visited by the kids, and they gave the kids a gift.
The grandparents were visited by the kids, and they gave the kids a gift.

The kids were visited by their grandparents, and their grandparents gave the kids a gift.
The kids were visited by their grandparents, and their grandparents gave the kids a gift.

The kids visited their grandparents, and their grandparents gave them a gift.
The kids visited their grandparents, and their grandparents gave them a gift.

The grandparents visited the kids, and the kids were given a gift by their grandparents.

1 answer

The best revision that corrects the shift in voice is:

The kids visited their grandparents, and their grandparents gave them a gift.

This revision maintains a consistent active voice for the first part of the sentence and clarifies who is giving the gift in the second part.

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