Kyle heard a sound like the whisper of forgotten secrets echoing from the depths of his grandmother’s crumbling house, so he tiptoed down the creaky stairs, each step groaning under the weight of memories, to investigate.
Use the sentence to answer the question.
Kyle heard a sound on the first floor of his grandmother’s old house, so he walked down the creaky stairs to investigate.
Revise the passage so it uses figurative language to improve the description of the setting in this passage.
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Kyle heard a sound, so loud he could hardly believe it, on the first floor of his grandmother’s old house, so he walked down the creaky stairs to investigate.
Kyle heard a sound, so loud he could hardly believe it, on the first floor of his grandmother’s old house, so he walked down the creaky stairs to investigate.
Kyle heard a sound like chimes clinking on the first floor of the ancient ruin of his grandmother’s house, so he walked down the creaky stairs to investigate.
Kyle heard a sound like chimes clinking on the first floor of the ancient ruin of his grandmother’s house, so he walked down the creaky stairs to investigate.
Kyle heard a loud clinking sound on the first floor of his grandmother’s old house, so he crept quietly down the creaky stairs to investigate.
Kyle heard a loud clinking sound on the first floor of his grandmother’s old house, so he crept quietly down the creaky stairs to investigate.
Kyle heard a sound on the first floor of his grandmother’s crumbling house, so he tiptoed down the creaky stairs to investigate.
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