Kyle heard a sound like ghostly chimes echoing through the dusty corners of his grandmother’s ancient house, its walls steeped in memories and shadows. With a heart racing like a restless drum, he tiptoed down the creaky stairs, each step creaking and groaning as if whispering secrets of the past, determined to uncover the mystery that lay below.
Use the sentence to answer the question. Kyle heard a sound on the first floor of his grandmother’s old house, so he walked down the creaky stairs to investigate. Revise the passage so it uses figurative language to improve the description of the setting in this passage. (1 point) Responses Kyle heard a sound on the first floor of his grandmother’s crumbling house, so he tiptoed down the creaky stairs to investigate. Kyle heard a sound on the first floor of his grandmother’s crumbling house, so he tiptoed down the creaky stairs to investigate. Kyle heard a loud clinking sound on the first floor of his grandmother’s old house, so he crept quietly down the creaky stairs to investigate. Kyle heard a loud clinking sound on the first floor of his grandmother’s old house, so he crept quietly down the creaky stairs to investigate. Kyle heard a sound, so loud he could hardly believe it, on the first floor of his grandmother’s old house, so he walked down the creaky stairs to investigate. Kyle heard a sound, so loud he could hardly believe it, on the first floor of his grandmother’s old house, so he walked down the creaky stairs to investigate. Kyle heard a sound like chimes clinking on the first floor of the ancient ruin of his grandmother’s house, so he walked down the creaky stairs to investigate.
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Kyle heard a sound like chimes clinking on the first floor of the ancient ruin of his grandmother’s house, so he walked down the creaky stairs to investigate.