The two excerpts that use language to build an informal tone are:
- “At dusk, fingertips numb, Ona tore sheets of bark from the tree, building herself a papery cradle on the uneven floorboards where she could sleep for years.”
- “Though two walls were missing, she concluded it was due to wind and rain and the birch tree that had swindled its way up and through the middle of the sweet, abandoned home.”
These selections contain more conversational language and imagery that evokes a sense of familiarity and warmth, contributing to an informal tone.