Use the paragraph to complete this activity

High schools should require all students to take four years of math, even though most students will probably not become mathematicians many of them will Choose a profession or math plays an important role, architects, pharmacist, and carpenters all use math every day. A strong math foundation in high school is important for students to succeed in these and in other professions.
Two sentences explain which word or phrase should be added to the paragraph to increase its cohesion and why that word or phrase would increase cohesion

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Additionally, including the phrase "in today's world" before "architects, pharmacist, and carpenters" will increase cohesion in the paragraph. This addition helps to connect the ideas by providing a specific context for why math is important for these professions. It emphasizes the relevance and necessity of math skills in modern society, making the argument for requiring four years of math in high school even more compelling.