The best revision that would introduce hyperbole to make the description more vivid is to replace “hours” with “the rest of my life.” This exaggeration enhances the impact of the sound experience described.
Use the paragraph to answer the question.
The music played so loud I knew my ears would be ringing for hours. The band rocked. We thumped our feet to the beat and shouted along with the lyrics.
Which revision would introduce hyperbole to make the description more vivid?
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replace “rocked” with “was on fire”
replace “rocked” with “was on fire”
add “at the top of our lungs” after “shouted”
add “at the top of our lungs” after “shouted”
replace “hours” with “the rest of my life”
replace “hours” with “the rest of my life”
add “like maniacs” after “shouted”
add “like maniacs” after “shouted”
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