The music played so loud I knew my ears would be ringing for hours. The band rocked. We thumped our feet to the beat and shouted along with the lyrics.
Which revision would introduce hyperbole to make the description more vivid?
(1 point)
Responses
replace “rocked” with “was on fire”
replace “rocked” with “was on fire”
replace “hours” with “the rest of my life”
replace “hours” with “the rest of my life”
add “at the top of our lungs” after “shouted”
add “at the top of our lungs” after “shouted”
add “like maniacs” after “shouted”
1 answer
The best revision that would introduce hyperbole to make the description more vivid is:
replace “hours” with “the rest of my life”
This change significantly exaggerates the duration of the ringing in the ears, creating a more vivid and hyperbolic image.
