A. adding "of warm pumpkin and spices" after "smell"
This revision would enhance the sensory language by providing a specific and appealing image of the smell, making it more vivid and relatable.
Use the paragraph to answer the question.
Laya waited to put the muffins in the oven. She knew as soon as they went in, the smell would let the cat out of the bag. She never managed to surprise her sister with breakfast on her birthday. Mai always woke up first
-or, even if she didn't, caught Laya mid-cook.
Which revision would help the paragraph use more sensory language?
A. adding "of warm pumpkin and spices" after "smell"
B. adding "red-handed" after "caught Laya"
C. adding "impatiently" after "waited"
D. adding "hot" before "oven"
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