Dear Hiring Manager,
I came across your job posting online and would like to express my interest in the position of summer custodian. I believe I possess the necessary attributes to excel in this role, as I have a deep affinity for amusement parks, have availability during the summer months, and maintain a joyful and positive demeanor. The job appears to be straightforward, and I am confident in my ability to handle it competently. Moreover, my intent to secure funds for a new gaming system further motivates me to pursue this opportunity. Please inform me of your preferred commencement date. Enclosed with this email is my resume for your perusal.
Respectfully,
Kurt Gardener
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Dear Hiring Guy,
I saw your job on the Internet, and I'd like to apply. I'd make a great summer custodian, because I love amusement parks, I don't have school in the summer, and I'm really fun, happy guy. The job sounds really easy, so I'm sure I'll be fine. Besides, I'd like to earn some money to save up for a new game system. Let me know when you're ready for me to start work. I've included my resume with this email.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
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