Dear Editor,
I am writing in response to your article regarding the new school cafeteria, as it is of great concern to the student body. The article's claim that the new cafeteria will be a poor investment is inaccurate. Currently, our cafeteria is faced with numerous issues, such as inadequate space, unpleasant odors, unclean walls, and lengthy waiting times in line. These factors directly impact our ability to focus and thrive academically. I kindly request that you address these concerns by assigning your reporter to interview individuals who possess invaluable perspectives, including myself.
Sincerely,
Karrina Sweet
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Dear Editor,
I am writing because your article on the new school cafeteria was horrible and your reporter doesn't know anything. The article said that the new cafeteria will be a waste of money, and it is wrong. Our cafeteria doesn't have enough room, it smells bad, the walls are dirty, and it takes too long to get through the line. How do you expect us to learn when our lunches are gross? You need to correct your article and send your reporter to interview people who really matter, like me!
Sincerely,
Karrina Sweet
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