I'd change these:
/ u / u u / u / u u
Marvell's garden that place of solitude
u / u u / u /
is not where I'd choose to live
Speak the other lines aloud and see where you'll make other changes.
/ u / u / u u / u u
Marvell's garden that place of solitude
u / / u / u /
is not where I'd choose to live
/ u u / / u
yet is the fixed sundial
u / u /
that turns me round
u / u /
unwillingly
u u / /
is a hot glade
u / u / u u
as closer, closer I come to
/ u / u
contradiction
u u / / u / u /
to the shade green within the green
/
shade
Hi I'd just like to know if I've set the stresses to this stanza? and the rhythm it creates?
/ = stressed
u = unstressed
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