Thesis statement: Through an analysis of historical events and societal changes, this essay will prove that advancements in technology have had a profound impact on the way humans communicate and interact with each other.
Yes, the thesis statement is clear and effective. It clearly states the main focus of the essay, which is to prove the impact of technology on communication and interaction.
The punctuation and capitalization in the thesis statement are appropriate.
Today you will submit : your essay plan. You do NOT need to submit a completed essay. Your plan might take the form of an outline, a concept map, or the provided graphic organizer (see Lesson Intro page resources). This outline/plan should be created on a separate document. Be sure to include all requirements (below).
Type your thesis statement here. (You will upload your outline/plan in item 2.)
When you are done writing, ask yourself:
Did I include a clear, effective thesis statement? (2 points)
Does my thesis statement share the main focus of my essay? (2 points)
Did I use appropriate punctuation and capitalization? (2 points)
make it prove a point about something
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