The best choice to revise the underlined portion of the sentence is:
C. Pumping the volume up
This option maintains the original meaning while improving the flow of the sentence.
Which choice shows the correct way to revise the underlined portion of the sentence?
A.
no change
B.
Pumping up the volume
C.
Pumping the volume up
D.
To pump up the volume
1 answer
The best choice to revise the underlined portion of the sentence is:
C. Pumping the volume up
This option maintains the original meaning while improving the flow of the sentence.