Each of us who produces and raises a healthy child to adulthood has contributed to the world, yes?
I don't know what's confusing about "a healthy child"!
To earn the appreciation of honest critics
and endure the betrayal of false friends;
To follow the way your honest critics want you to trail and change their outlook about you. To suffer the pain your false friends give you from within, but don’t let it show up on the outside.
to leave the world a bit better,
whether by a healthy child,
a garden patch
or a redeemed social condition;
to know even one life has breathed easier
because you have lived.
To help out, support and give hope to individuals around. To make the atmosphere around you clean. To lead others to the direction of success. To give in your time? Importance? Show how to care for one unconditionally?
Writeacher I really do not understand "Healthy Child" thing. Also could you add in to this, if u don't mind that is.
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Thank you Writeacher; overall does everything seem good? I mean the changes I made...are they good?
Yes, with the exception of those last few lines. What did you decide to write about those last lines?