Title: Daydream
Mondays are the worst. I'd rather just stay in bed and chill all day rather than sitting through history class or maths. But here I am, sitting in class wishing for something to happen so my day could just be a little bit exciting. I looked out my window and I could see a bunch of students playing on the field, amongst the crowd, further to the end of the field was a puppy playing happily on the lush green field without a care in the world. Oh, how I wish I could traded places with him. Suddenly the clouds turned dark and a huge portal opened up at the far end of the field and a girl walked out. She was drop dead gorgeous, with her almond-shaped eyes, full lips and long wavy hair. Behind her was a man similarly beautiful built like an athlete. There was something off about them. They had a dead look in their eyes, like they knew something was going to happen. Students began noticing the couple and started gawking at their beautiful appearances. The puppy race towards the new comers barking viciously at them. I wonder what could cause the puppy to behave in such a manner towards the strangers. The man picked up the dog and twisted his neck with ease tearing it apart. I couldn't believe my eyes, I was to stunned to move. In the next two minutes the field was in chaos. The couple moved with lightning speed and began slaughtering the students one by one. Every kid they kill they drank their blood like vicious beasts. I froze and my whole body began shaking in fear. Suddenly I Iocked eyes with the woman. I couldn't breathe or move even though every cell in my being was aching to move or do something. She glanced around the field filled with dead bodies and then to me again.
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Mondays are the worst. I'd rather just stay in bed and chill all day rather than sitting through history class or maths. But here I am, sitting in class wishing for something exciting to happen. I looked out my window and saw students playing on the field, and further away a puppy was happily playing on the lush green grass.
Suddenly, the clouds darkened and a portal opened at the far end of the field. A girl and a man emerged, stunningly beautiful but with a dead look in their eyes. The puppy raced towards them and started barking viciously. The man twisted the puppy's neck with ease, sending a shiver down my spine.
Chaos erupted as the couple began slaughtering the students, drinking their blood like vicious beasts. I was frozen in fear, unable to move. The woman locked eyes with me, sending a chill down my spine.
Just when it seemed like all hope was lost, a sudden blast of light illuminated the field. I heard a loud voice echoing through the chaos, "Stop!"
The couple froze in their tracks, looking bewildered. The voice belonged to a group of powerful beings who had come to stop them. They quickly neutralized the threat and restored peace to the field.
As the beings disappeared, the students slowly regained their composure. It was as if nothing had happened, as if the nightmare was just a daydream. But the memory of that day would haunt me forever, a reminder of the darkness that lurked in the shadows. And from that day on, I learned to appreciate the ordinary, for sometimes, the most mundane days could turn into a living nightmare.