This year, the science fair was won by Alex Muros. His project explained why leaves change colors in the fall. Alex was given a prize by the principal. He will also get to present his project at the statewide science fair in the spring. Alex will be taken out for ice cream by his parents to celebrate his hard work.
Rewrite the paragraph so that all of the sentences are in the active voice.
(Can someone check it and tell me if it's correct please?)
MY ANSWER:
This year, Alex Muros won the science fair. His project explained why leaves change color in fall. Alex got a prize by the principle. He will present his project at the state wide science fair in spring. Alex will be taken out for ice cream by his parents to celebrate his hard work.
(Please help me so everything makes sense and is correct.)
Thank you. (:
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Looks good!
“Alex will be taken…” = still passive.
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