This sentence contains a dangling modifier.
As a Principal Technical Editor/Writer for Alpha Communications, with over 12 years of experience, the internship would provide an opportunity to work with technical documents outside my familiar "comfort zone" of technical manuals.
I think this is in passive voice.
Would this work to fix it?
The internship would provide me, a Principal Technical Editor/Writer for Alpha Communications, with over 12 years of experience,an opportunity to work with technical documents outside my familiar "comfort zone" of technical manuals.
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Are you already the "Principal Technical Editor/Writer for Alpha Communications"?
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