Question

This passage uses a mix of first-person Third person point of view ,and the verb tenses are inconsistent. To improve this passage, we should use a consistent third-person point of view and maintain a consistent present tense.
make this look like a 5th grader wrote it

Answer 1

Sure! Please provide the passage you'd like me to adjust, and I'll help you revise it to keep a consistent third-person point of view and present tense, making it sound like a 5th grader wrote it.