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The Egyptian farmers blocked floods from the Nile River and irrigated it which helped them get enough water. They were able to store their crops so that they didn't get washed away or stolen.
The Egyptian farmers blocked floods from the Nile River and irrigated it which helped them get enough water. They were able to store their crops so that they didn't get washed away or stolen.
Egyptian farmers managed flood control and irrigation of the Nile River to ensure an adequate water supply. They also implemented storage systems for their crops to prevent damage or theft.