this is what i wrote As he looked upon the green vines, a newfound determination and sense of purpose began to stir within him, motivated by the memories of his beloved family and the
With renewed determination, he made his way to the real estate market, ready to sell his garden and embark on a new journey in the countryside, where he could once again cultivate the land and nurture life, just like he did with his family by his side.
fix the feedback Show me how he comes to the epiphany that he wants to sell his house and move to countryside, don’t just tell me he gets a sense of purpose)
(Instead of him making his way, he makes the decision to start life anew)write in one pargraph could include monologue him saying word out aloud do not say he just feel the purpose
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As he gazed upon the lush green vines in his garden, memories of his beloved family flooded his mind. The laughter of his children, the warm embrace of his spouse, the joy of tending to their garden together - all of these moments came rushing back to him. And in that moment, a profound realization washed over him. He uttered to himself, "I need a fresh start, a new beginning." With a newfound determination, he made the decision to sell his house and move to the countryside. There, he could once again cultivate the land, nurture life, and start afresh, just like he did with his family by his side.