why don't you say:
sitting and standing properly are crucial factors to maintaining a healthy back.
This is one sentence which I am having a bit difficulties on. It contains too much wordiness from my outlook.
Proper sitting and standing are very crucial factors in having a healthy back.
Does this make better sense?
Sitting and standing properly are cruical factors in helping you maintain a healthy back.
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thanks Maggie, that does sound better
:-)
:-)
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