this is another body paragraph to my research paper. can I get this one proofread as well thanks!
Both Japan and the United States protect freedoms of speech and press by similar provisions in each nation’s constitution. For example, the First Amendment of the U.S. Constitution holds that “Congress shall make no law abridging the freedom of speech, or the press.” While the Japanese Kenpō Article XXI promises that, “freedom of speech, press and all other forms of expression are guaranteed. No censorship shall be maintained, or shall the secrecy of any means of communication be violated.” Both countries also recognize protection for opinion or fair comment on matters of public concern. However in the U.S. only pure opinion which does not imply a noticeable fact has complete First Amendment Protection. In Japan such statements are treated as an opinion or comment when facts alleged in the statement regarding other individuals cannot be proved by evidence and an allegation when the facts can be proved by evidence.
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