I don't understand.
Why is your first sentence favorable to empires when your thesis states the opposite?
Start over again. Perhaps your first sentence could be something like: Empires are dangerous and cause many unnecessary wars.
this is an intro for an argumentative essay, the thesis for the essay is supposed to be that empires are bad..i need help in bringing that out better ( will be forever happy if it rewritten)
empires are needed and inevitable. These people would be considered ultra-nationalist. Others believe that empires are dangerous and cause many unnecessary wars. These people are deemed internationalist as they are trying to promote global peace. Clearly, the ultra-nationalism of building an empire is wrong and should be avoided.
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for the essay we got a source we were supposed to talk about the good and bad points for building empires and then pick a side
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