Think about the argument the students in the podcast made about increasing the number of bike lanes. Choose two statements that add the most to the argument and incorporate them in your own persuasive letter.

My friends and I would love to have a bike lane to ride to school every day.
Studies show that people who live in communities where biking is encouraged are healthier and happier.
Our town should not fall behind neighboring towns, which already have bike lanes.
A bike lane would be very useful because nearly everyone in our community has ridden a bike before, so it would be heavily used.
Having a bike lane might convince more people to go our and buy a bike.
Bike riders throughout the town report that they do not ride their bikes on many streets because they are afraid of getting hit. proofread and edit using the Criteria for success below:
provides a clear argument for adding a bike lane
incorporates at least 2 pieces of evidence above
uses varied transitions to hold your readers interest
presents a formal argument in 3rd person (the reader, bikers, members of the community) 5 grade words

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[Your Name]
[Your Address]
[City, State, Zip]
[Email Address]
[Date]

[Recipient's Name]
[Recipient's Title]
[City Council or Appropriate Authority]
[Authority's Address]
[City, State, Zip]

Dear [Recipient's Name],

I am writing to express the strong need for a designated bike lane in our community. Adding a bike lane would not only enhance safety for cyclists but also promote a healthier, more active lifestyle for everyone.

Studies show that people who live in communities where biking is encouraged are healthier and happier. By creating a bike lane, our town would be promoting physical activity, leading to improved well-being for our residents. Furthermore, having a dedicated space for cyclists would ensure their safety, as many riders throughout the town report that they avoid biking on certain streets due to the fear of getting hit by vehicles. This hesitation limits the number of people who would otherwise enjoy the benefits of cycling.

Moreover, a bike lane would be heavily utilized because nearly everyone in our community has ridden a bike before. Not only would it provide a safe route for students like my friends and me to ride to school, but it would also encourage more people to go out and buy bikes. By making biking a safe and attractive option, we can see an increase in participation, benefiting both our health and the environment.

In conclusion, our town should not fall behind neighboring towns, which already have successful bike lanes. I strongly urge the council to consider the numerous advantages that a dedicated bike lane would bring to our community. Thank you for taking the time to consider this important proposal.

Sincerely,
[Your Name]
[Your Grade/Class]

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