Thesis Statement

Question

Although, the first admendment protects freedom of speech in many ways, the boundaries are so complex.

Please Help is this a good thesis statement?

Answer 1

I'd change the word "so" to "quite" -- the rest sounds fine.

This means that your entire paper will be devoted to proving there are complexities involving the first amendment beyond the literal wording, right?

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/thesis.htm
and
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html

Answer 2

You need to delete that comma after "Although"!