The revision that would introduce an allusion to make the description more vivid is: replace "smile" with "Mona Lisa smile." This allusion directly references the enigmatic quality of the Mona Lisa's smile, enhancing the description's mystery and depth.
There was something unknowable about her smile. Try as I might, I couldn't figure out what she was thinking.
Which revision would introduce an allusion to make the description more vivid?
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replace "Try as I might, I couldn't figure out" with "Even with the skills of Sherlock himself, I couldn't have figured out"
• replace "smile" with "Mona Lisa smile"
• add "like a mysterious old song" after "smile"
• add "in a million years" after "Try as I might, I couldn't figure out"
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