Question

There are three countries; one is Canada, another is Belgium, and the other is China. Which country do you want to travel to? Why do you want to travel to the country? I want to travel to Canada. I want to visit Ottawa, the capital of Canada. People in Ottawa enjoys eating beaver tails. I want to try beaver tails. They look sweet. I want to travel to Belgium and I want to visit Brussels, the capital of Belgium. We can try Brussels waffles there. They are thick and have large pockets. I want to travel to China. I want to visit Beijing, the capital of China. On Wangfujing Street in Beijing, we can find all kinds of stick food. Especially I want to try fruit sticks there.
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Would you check the passage and correct errors? Thank you again.

Answer 1

The first two sentences seem clumsy; I would combine them!

<i><b>Among three countries -- Canada, Belgium, and China -- which would you want to travel to?</b> Why do you want to travel <b>there</b>? I want to travel to Canada <b>and</b> visit Ottawa, the capital of Canada. People in Ottawa <b>enjoy</b> eating beaver tails. I want to try beaver tails <b>because</b> they look sweet.

I <b>also</b> want to travel to Belgium <b>and</b> visit Brussels, the capital of Belgium. We can try Brussels waffles there. They are thick and have large pockets.

I want to travel to China <b>and</b> visit Beijing, the capital of China. On Wangfujing Street in Beijing, we can find all kinds of stick food. <b>I especially</b> want to try fruit sticks there. </i>

Answer 2

In addition, I would omit "of Canada" and "of Belgium" and "of China" after the word "capital" in their respective sentences.