The two children approached the cave cautiously. The interior looked dark and damp. Prodding each other gently, each child tried to get the other to enter the cave first. In three to five sentences, rewrite the paragraph using dialogue to make the story more vivid.
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"Hey, Bobby, you go first," whispered Sarah, her voice quivering. "No way, you go first!" Bobby replied, his eyes wide with fear. Sarah pointed inside, "I think I see something moving in there, you have to go check!" Bobby shook his head, "You go, I'm not going in there!"